....
An eye turns on me
And I behold that look,
But my smile fades away
For that face has a question
A question that I could understand
But I am not ready to accept,
For life is not simple and not acceptable
But rather is still understandable
Her eyes tells me to leave,
To leave right away;
For she has oceans in her eyes,
Which are hard to behold.
The day is such,
That I wanna grant her wish;
But my inside wont agree,
If I wont see it with my own eyes.
A pair of lips on hers,
After vows from the two;
With cheers all around,
And just knots in my stomach.
Back home I came,
With emptiness all around;
Cheers astounding in my ears,
And her looks in my mind.
Life is not simple,
And now its not even understandable;
For this is the end,
And its not ok after all…
A comment on the written text and the writing style is every Authors right. So please honour me with the same..
16 comments:
Amazing.. :)
Never did I know that there was a poet in you..mail me your Eco Prof's id..I will surely send him an appreciation mail ;)
You give me the motivativation to attend all the classes..:)
With almost two years in hand, and lots of boring lectures in the schedule..I hope we, the readers, will get lots of interesting,fascinating, mind blowing posts.. :)
life is a question. even if well answered cannot be absorbed. comprehending it takes us nowhere but to the pains of past. someone's loss could be endured unlike emotions. emotions that play with us all through the life. vows for some are unforgetful, for some very easy to take.
it pinched a li'l and prompted something..
"you came alone and you'll be gone alone…"
If Only...
If only we were strong enough,
If only we would realize the imp of time,
If only we realized that its only 'one' life,
If only we were less logical nd thought from the heart..
Then..we'd never be alone..not even on our deathbed..and things would be 'ok' in the end..
You are a nice writer and I say that because there seems to be no effort in your writing. It is as life is a flowing river.
See, life is the same for all of us. Don't give it the power to hurt you.
There's a flower and there are thorns. Let your eyes see the flowers. :) And when you feel the thorns, come to your biggest friend... God :)
If only..each of us had the capability of explaining such bitter truths of life in such simple words.But, only a few are blessed with such a gift.Your work is a piece of art, simple yet strong.
nice pick at the words and easily putting them together,..
nice writing sir.....life is really not simple....
wow...good use of the words....
its amazing how effortlessly you could pen down the turmoil all of us go through at some point in time or the other....bt this turmoil is d actual strength of one's character.
simply beautifully and beautifully simply written :-)
aah how effortlessly you have penned down the turmoil all of us go through at some point in time or the other....
but its this turmoil that is the test of the strength of our character in the truest sense.
well...the poem is simply beautiful and beautifully simple
Nice work Dude...
But Sach- Sach batana kis ka Frustration hai kyonki itna accha koi isi Halat me likhta hai.. ;)
jokes apart.. nice writing.
hey that's indeed a very nice write up.....
Dont wanna add any dose of my philosophy.....its something bitter and poignant, and the choise of words convey the pain.
The idea comes across as highly original, 'n is well conveyed.
I like what u write coz its so well thought over. Hope to read more of ur scribblings.
N' someday I'll comment on the train entry too ;-)
Dont wanna add any dose of my philosophy.....its something bitter and poignant, and the choise of words convey the pain.
The idea comes across as highly original, 'n is well conveyed.
I like what u write coz its so well thought over. Hope to read more of ur scribblings.
N' someday I'll comment on the train entry too ;-)
hey sir..how u doing ?
Didnt know you had a blog and that you could write so well..:P
nice post and yeah, please try and visit my blog whenever you find time !!
Hmm...ossum...got stuck somewhere in between only while reading...:(
Feels so good to read something full with emotions after a long time...!!
Really nice work dude ..
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